The marae trip
On Tuesday I went to the marae.
First we got on the bus.
Next we got to the marae we had to be quiet when we got there.
Then we got welcomed on to the marae.
A lady named Fiona welcomed us no to the marae.
Then finally we got into the marae.
When we got in there we had something to eat.
But we got to listen to uncle pat's speech.
We did not sit down straight away.
Uncle Pat had a speech we prayed our food.
After we did it Mr Wilkinson did it to.
Finally we got to eat the food and we had a drink.
We put our bags on the grass.
Then we had a break and a play.
Then we listened to a story.
We had some food to eat.
Then we did our mihi but we all had to say it.
We got to visit the graveyard.
We had to flick water over our back.
That day was fun.
Then we walked back.
Then we thought about the day.
BY CHELSEA
awesome chlsea
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this Chelsea. I like how you have started each sentence with a capital letter and ended with full stops.
ReplyDeleteNice Chelsea you have a great recount and full stops
ReplyDeleteHi Chelsea my name is Freya from Kaniere School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have written about going to the marae because you have explained what you have done there.
Was it fun?
Hi Chelsea my name is Abby from kaniere School. I like way you have written about going to the marae. We have got a new local marae.
ReplyDeleteWell done Chelsea..That was a wonderful recount on your trip, it sounded like you really enjoyed yourself
ReplyDeleteHi Chelsea Ethan here i like the way you said what we did
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