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Thursday, November 10, 2016

The little Boy and the mysterious monster???

we are learning to Use full stops and capital letters correctly.
  • Write using compound sentences (and, because, but, so)
Use some adjectives and verbs (describing and doing words)






The little Boy and the mysterious monster???

On a sunday night it was dark and cloudy. Tom was roasting marshmallows for a treat.

Meanwhile...  a sea monster named Fred was told to stay still and he was hungry. Then he smelled something yummy so he went to see what was yummy.

and he begged Tom  for a marshmallow and he looked at Fred and he pulled the marshmallow out of  Tom's hand. After Fred got the marshmallow in his mouth the  marshmallows went crunch  crunch as the marshmallow melted in fred's mouth it was watery. When he had seen the marshmallow he took it with his tongue and then he wanted more then  he had ever  had he liked marshmallow  fred had lots of marshmallow fred was a cute monster   tom was scared  fred stole the marshmallow
He was being cute tom gave Fred a marshmallow
Fred smiled at tom


next time i am going to do some more writing.
 

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