The Day It All Went WRONG!!!!!
One day after school two girls named Chelsea and Emalea were walking home
from school. They founded a glittery rose gold footpath!
They went down the path
and then it lead them to a beautiful rainbow forest.
It had everything magical you can
think off! They stayed there for a bit and had a look
around the place. It was going good
until . . . A BIG black and red DRAGON got out of her
cage and started to blow fire at
Chelsea and Emalea! “ AHHHHHHHHHH RUNNNNNN” said
Chelsea and Emalea!!!!!
“ GET OUT OF THIS PLACE!!!!!” Said the two girls. They ran
for 5 minutes then finally
got to Emalea’s house. Her mum was so worried about them!! So
Emalea’s mum called
Chelsea’s mum and said “ Chelsea is at my house” Chelsea’s mum came
and got Chelsea.
The next day the girls went back to the forest. They notest that the dragon
didn't follow them
home. They thought about why it didn't follow them home. Chelsea said it
could be because
there is an invisible barrier stopping the dragon from following them. So they
went there every
day after school and became friends with the dragon and then they said to there
mum about
what has been happening after school. You are probably thinking how did they
become
friends with the dragon? Well first they hid in the bosh. Then they gave the dragon
some
e food to eat and for her. Then the dragon started to like the two girls soooo much she
let them into her nest filled with baby dragons! And that was the end of the story!
from school. They founded a glittery rose gold footpath!
They went down the path
and then it lead them to a beautiful rainbow forest.
It had everything magical you can
think off! They stayed there for a bit and had a look
around the place. It was going good
until . . . A BIG black and red DRAGON got out of her
cage and started to blow fire at
Chelsea and Emalea! “ AHHHHHHHHHH RUNNNNNN” said
Chelsea and Emalea!!!!!
“ GET OUT OF THIS PLACE!!!!!” Said the two girls. They ran
for 5 minutes then finally
got to Emalea’s house. Her mum was so worried about them!! So
Emalea’s mum called
Chelsea’s mum and said “ Chelsea is at my house” Chelsea’s mum came
and got Chelsea.
The next day the girls went back to the forest. They notest that the dragon
didn't follow them
home. They thought about why it didn't follow them home. Chelsea said it
could be because
there is an invisible barrier stopping the dragon from following them. So they
went there every
day after school and became friends with the dragon and then they said to there
mum about
what has been happening after school. You are probably thinking how did they
become
friends with the dragon? Well first they hid in the bosh. Then they gave the dragon
some
e food to eat and for her. Then the dragon started to like the two girls soooo much she
let them into her nest filled with baby dragons! And that was the end of the story!
So that was my story hope you liked this blog post! Next time I am going to add more Detail.
Kia Ora Chelsea. My name is Fonz. I am a Yr 7 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about The Day It All Went Wrong. I think your writing is a good piece of work. There were a few spelling mistakes. You can use apostrophes which is great. The only thing I would like to ask you is why did you use centre justification of the text?
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting and blog you later.